Whoa Tekura, your game sounds like a combination of Sci-fi and tradition #soundslikeitcouldebescarytoo. But how are you gonna show that the twins are in a parallel world? Is it through art? or are they gonna go into that portal?. Either way the game sound pretty fun you smart fulla
I can see that you are understanding aspects of games that could be used to help your target audience understand your game quite easily. If you were to put this into your game what type of audience are you going to target? and would you use the same narration method from this game?. I think the graphics are pretty cool too, as it is simple, with the big headed characters and art it takes on a more fairy tale/fiction type of vibe. Engaging the audience with this art that seems to be mocking either the year/the event that's happening makes the graphics and the game interesting.
I think it is a great idea to introduce some action to your game through this way and it's better since it is paint balls and not gruesome guns. So parents wouldn't be so against this game as much as others due to the lack of gore with the paint balls and this would also be good for your target audience that are females that maybe just want to play a game with some action but doesn't have bloody violence. You can also manage to maintain the horror genre thing going. How long are you planning to make each level be? and are you going to incorporate anymore island attractions into the game? Is she also going to carry the gun with her to another level?
Your game is sooooo cute, I wanna play it. But what are each of your levels going to look like? and what genre conventions are you going to use for this game? is it going to be a fairy tale genre, action, romance etc? and how long are you planning on making each level in order to meet ze requirements of ze brief? Is John still going to climb a tree to get Alicyn or is he going to scale the castle walls this time or something? I am just curious as to how each of your levels will play out
tauvira